High school

September 26, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."


Winner takes all
looser takes none
welcome to high school
isn't this fun?

The games can get hard
and then they're confusing
but ultimate death
is the concept of loosing

Back stabing
fingers crossed
hearts broken
friendships lost

High school is hard
but it's just a game
we all want to live
want to make our name


The author's comments:
Highschool... ugh

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on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:48 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
24 articles 4 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you" Tyler Durden Fight Club

I absolutely loved this. It's so true and well written. Great job

on Nov. 21 2011 at 9:35 pm
Signed_DK SILVER, Declo, Idaho
5 articles 1 photo 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no line between genius and insanity, I erased it.

Violence isn't the answer, it's the solution.

Oh my goodness I loved it. The entire thing sounds so much like high school really is!

5/5


manndypanndy said...
on Nov. 8 2011 at 9:58 am
manndypanndy, Norwalk, Connecticut
0 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You look at me, it's like you hit me with lightning"
Starry Eyed- Ellie Goulding

this was really good! i love the second stanza :)

rinkumanhas said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 6:13 am
 like this, i want to see more from you keep it up.

on Sep. 3 2011 at 8:41 pm
soarlikeme23 SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
9 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands" e.e. cummings

I really like this! It is so true. When you said high school is a game, I was like "whoa, they have a point"

on Aug. 12 2011 at 9:38 pm
emilybwrites SILVER, Villa Hills, Kentucky
5 articles 0 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
last night i lay in bed, looking up at the stars and i thought to myself, where the heck is the ceiling?

i loved this great imagery! please check out my poems "forgotten domain" and "cumulus prison" and comment/rate! im dying for some helpful insightt!

on Jun. 18 2011 at 12:41 pm
shayKittyFlcoka GOLD, Blockingham, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't give my emtions to people who dont matter to me. you cant make me angry, happy, sad, or watever unless you count.

i feel tha same..smh! but gud work. its a gud thing ur able to write wat u feel n not walk dwn the path of destruction bcuz of rude ppl. GUD WORK!

on Jun. 7 2011 at 2:55 pm
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
24 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

awesome.

just freaking awesome ^_^

5/5 (:


jmurph said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 11:53 am
jmurph, Saugus, Massachusetts
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That was great and so true! That was everything high school is about!

michy_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 2 2011 at 8:37 pm
michy_ BRONZE, Gainsville, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"everything happens for a reason."

thats why i transferred to online school, haha

on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:39 am
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

Actually I would't worry. I wrote this poem at the beginning of freshman year; now that I'm older highschool is really chill. Just keep your friends close. 

me13 said...
on Mar. 2 2011 at 8:36 pm
i totally agree with this poem but highschool is what you make it

Daydreamish said...
on Feb. 1 2011 at 8:50 pm
Excellent :) I'm not in high-school yet but I'm not extremely freaked out. I've heard good things and bad things both...we'll just see what happens when I'm actually there... ;) Love the first stanza, by the way!

Bobo said...
on Jan. 31 2011 at 3:08 pm
I love this website and some of the books you have published

bigdreamer14 said...
on Jan. 26 2011 at 9:57 am
bigdreamer14, Y Ya Need To Know???, Louisiana
0 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can say that I'm a talented writer, but all I can do is write down my feelings on paper and form them into sentences with my own personal flavor.

This basically almost sums up what high school is like for people that are not popular. God, I really don't like high school at all... But great poem though!

on Dec. 13 2010 at 3:08 pm
AprilWesley1225 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
High school is AWESOME! I love this poem, this had me thinking. I love the line "friendships lost"(3.4) which means throughout high school your friends would leave, but you still have to move on. THINGS HAPPEN FOR A REASON! I love this one....

on Nov. 21 2010 at 7:44 pm
Jakethesnake SILVER, Hernando, Mississippi
6 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Read, Read... Read everything, then write."-William Faulkner

ah its not that bad. Im a junior in HS, it can be fun. but at the same time, you have to be careful. Kids are an evil creation, but define the future. I truly hate some of hte kids here, but I love others. THis is the place where friendships are made,(lasting ones, not those pathetic middle school ones), people grow up, and you begin to find out what you want ot do with your life.

Enjoy the 4 years buddy, They won't last.


on Nov. 14 2010 at 4:43 pm
WinterFairy PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
45 articles 15 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't dream it. Be it."
"Singing is praying twice, and dancing is singing with the body."
"Paper is more patient than man."
"Where you live shouldn't determine whether you live"

jeez some1s finally confirming my fears. im going 2 HS next year and am totally freaked out. as if that wasnt enough, i went 2 the same school of 200ish kids since i was 3 and now im goin 2 one of the biggest school in my city. not fun

ashley1 said...
on Sep. 16 2010 at 7:42 am
ashley1, Fredericksburg, Virginia
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I would have to say that this does describe high school and it is not no surprise to me.

on Aug. 29 2010 at 1:09 pm
Eatfoodzap SILVER, Winchester, Massachusetts
5 articles 2 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. But if you can overcome the sacrifice and make it your own, you will gain an irreplaceable Fullmetal heart."- Edward Elric

This is really good. The simplicity of it conveys so much emotion...I love it.




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