Tommorow

September 26, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."


Today it might feel like the end of your life
you look towards the end there's no light
but tomorrow will be a whole brand new day
no need to put up a fight

Today you might think that you're lonely
but there's someone else in your boat
you can't be the only one feeling alone
its no struggle to stay afloat

Keep your head held up high
the past will soon be the past
life can change in a second
no storms ever last


The author's comments:
Just a friendly reminder to have a positive aditude and keep a smile on your face

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on Aug. 5 2014 at 11:34 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Wow. Your poem is such a wonderful, encouraging, amazing and talented poem. Great job! Thank you for sharing this.

on Aug. 5 2014 at 2:23 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

I love your poem and what it talks about :D It's so true. There's a reason for everything that comes and goes and nothing lasts forever. The most important thing to get from life is that "It Goes On..." Great work you certainly should carry on. Defenitly a 5 stars rating :D

swaggyyoung said...
on Feb. 12 2014 at 9:59 am
swaggyyoung, New River, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
my love falls for you like a tree in the fall . by me

you will have better days in you -life as it progresses girl !

on May. 10 2012 at 9:30 pm
starzforever GOLD, Sebring, Florida
15 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
being me is the greatest gift

i really think this is a very though full poem but nice

on Dec. 28 2011 at 6:43 pm
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 36 comments
I love inspirational poetry like this!! It means a lot. Please look at my poem as well.

ferosa said...
on Sep. 19 2011 at 4:12 am
this is the best poem I read today. It was a well executed piece with truth springing out of its lines. keep the good job up.

aveawave GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2011 at 1:06 pm
aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the angel you're sworn to be: spread your wings and fly" :)

Im sorry, I dont meant to seem selfish or anything. Im trying my best to be a great writer, so writers like you could really help me out. I dont care if you vote for it or anything, I just want some critism to help me improve. Id really really appreciate it, thanks so much.

aveawave GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2011 at 1:01 pm
aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the angel you're sworn to be: spread your wings and fly" :)

I really like this! great work! would you mind looking at my work? I could really use some advice

 


on Jun. 26 2010 at 10:56 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

this is so true , I can so relate !

keep up the work , please come and check out my writing :) I would appreciate that


on Mar. 8 2010 at 6:40 pm
kittycatmaria BRONZE, Commerce City Co, Colorado
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see in the world" - Gandhi

Wonderful poem, we need more people to write things to motivate others! Great job!! :D


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