For a friend..

September 5, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."


Hopelessly sick
vomiting fear
mind springing wild
I wish you were here

Please know I love you
when life goes downhill
and no one can hear you
believe that I will


The author's comments:
For my really good friend...

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on Jan. 15 2017 at 12:26 pm
Sofia_Gonz07 GOLD, San Marcos, CA, California
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That's so good, thanks for sharing that

on Mar. 19 2013 at 4:28 am
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

This is abosutely amazing... I'd be insanely happy if any of my friends wrote something so amazing for me..Your friend is really luckyy... and about the writing style, It's really interesting, kind of captures a person's attention and then holds it there...I loved reading :D

on Feb. 1 2013 at 12:56 am
Puzzle PLATINUM, Orem, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons,
Eat them.
They do not taste that bad.

Life is like autumn.
Stop to crunch the pesky leaves.

Love is... let me think...

Don't judge a book by its cover.

Poetry is a way to put words to things that are unexplainable.

I know it has been a few years since posting this, but I have to say I loved this. :) Short and sweet with a beautiful meaning.  Remember, getting older doesn't mean you should stop writing. Don't stop. You've got a lot of potential here. :)

kaasha BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2011 at 8:48 pm
kaasha BRONZE, Roxbury Crossing, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not."- Kurt Cobain

i love it.

 


kaasha BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2011 at 8:37 pm
kaasha BRONZE, Roxbury Crossing, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not."- Kurt Cobain

nice piece. says alot in so little words.

on Jul. 14 2010 at 5:12 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

That was really good =] short and sweet , great work ! Please check out my work if you have a chance

on Mar. 24 2010 at 5:47 am
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

When I wrote this I was really worried about a friend. She seemed depressed, she wasn't eating, there was a lot going on in her life and I didn't know what to do. Luckily that is behind us now, but at the time it was terrifying! Of course its nowhere near as extreme as your situation but I know watching your friends go through something bad is almost as painful as going through it yourself! Thanks for the comment:]

on Feb. 8 2010 at 4:44 pm
IsobelFree DIAMOND, Hamilton, Other
71 articles 20 photos 298 comments

Favorite Quote:
"As long as there is open road, the familiar has the most formidable competitor." - Anonymous

I love this. I can connect to this so well. I don't know what situation your friend is in, but my best friend in the world is in a really bad situation (abusive parents, changing foster homes, suicide attempts) and I think this really applies to her. Great job. Really beautiful and eloquent.


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