For my best friend

September 5, 2009
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I want to help
but you don't care
You're hurting so badly
it's simply not fair

No one deserves this
mostly not you
I know I'm not perfect
But what should I do?

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writer3499 said...
Sept. 3, 2012 at 7:56 pm
Wow this is rellly great! One of the reasons why this is so fantastic is because it hows passion and is written beautifully! Awesome peice! I know you didn't ask for advice on how to make your friend fell better and stuff but I can relate to this and most of the time when my friend is talking to me I don't really know what to do so I just listen and try to think of a way to change her perspective. You know, say things like "at least your not on fire right now" most of the time ... (more »)
purple.lollipop.bby said...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 12:15 pm
THis is very nice. I'm sure you will find a way to help her.
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 25, 2010 at 5:05 pm
well yeah i just read all the stuff you have on here, and your really amazing. keep writing!
princess4ever said...
May 2, 2010 at 8:42 am
I love this poem. I've read some of ur poems. ur really talented
DramaQueen106 said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 4:25 pm
wow dis rlly shows how u feel..nice!:)
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