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I want to help
but you don't care
You're hurting so badly
it's simply not fair

No one deserves this
mostly not you
I know I'm not perfect
But what should I do?




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writer3499 said...
Sept. 3, 2012 at 7:56 pm:
Wow this is rellly great! One of the reasons why this is so fantastic is because it hows passion and is written beautifully! Awesome peice! I know you didn't ask for advice on how to make your friend fell better and stuff but I can relate to this and most of the time when my friend is talking to me I don't really know what to do so I just listen and try to think of a way to change her perspective. You know, say things like "at least your not on fire right now" most of the time ... (more »)
 
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purple.lollipop.bby said...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 12:15 pm:
THis is very nice. I'm sure you will find a way to help her.
 
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pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 25, 2010 at 5:05 pm:
well yeah i just read all the stuff you have on here, and your really amazing. keep writing!
 
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princess4ever said...
May 2, 2010 at 8:42 am:
I love this poem. I've read some of ur poems. ur really talented
 
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DramaQueen106 said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 4:25 pm:
wow dis rlly shows how u feel..nice!:)
 
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