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I saw it lying there, and I don’t know
how and why this lie could keep going on.
I believed our love was pure as fallen snow
But you knew that out love was merrily a con.

I gripped it tightly and slammed it against the wall,
What’s your problem with living an honest life?
I wanted to hurt you where no one could hear your call,
But I knew it would be the result of my own strife.

I gave you every ounce of all my trust
I have you every ounce of all my soul.
But now that trust has perished into dust.
May the devil’s furnace scorch your soul as coal.

I may have been the one to feel the pain
But in the end you shall feel Lucifer’s reign




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WritingLoverForever said...
Jan. 6, 2013 at 9:14 am:
Great poem! I love how each stanza transitioned into a new stage of emotion.  Very powerful message. Nice job! :)
 
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Bug-a-Boo13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 6, 2013 at 12:44 am:
Nice work! In the future, try to make the meaning more clear within the poem itself, instead of having to explain it on the side.  Besides that, the sonnet was awesome! 
 
Bug-a-Boo13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 6, 2013 at 12:49 am :
Sorry!  That was not how I meant to word that.  What I meant to say was:  You made the meaning clear within the sonnet, so you did not need to explain it down on the side.
 
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*StandardToaster* said...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 10:02 pm:
this is really good, i like it?  take a look at my work?
 
*StandardToaster* replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 10:02 pm :
sry i meant to do an exclamation point!
 
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Corrine J. said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 12:07 pm:
Vry nice:) sad in the beginning but revenge in the end!!!! The BEST!
 
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bluemagnet22 said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 11:40 am:
Vry Nice:) well written and sooo true... I've been cheated on n it honestly is one of the worst feelings:(
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 3:03 pm:
wow! :) haha i like this. you wrote a timeline within the sonnet and it's very creative. i can feel all the emotion and easily relate :) great job! check out some of my work too if you get a chance.
 
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