November 21, 2013
Have you ever felt weak?
Lost the words you were trying to speak.
Maybe you drowned in your darkest hour.
You never knew pain would taste this sour.
Thank you for abandoning me.
I do nothing but sorrow and whep.
I never knew it would hurt this bad.
Drifting away like an empty bag.
You strike with anger like a lightening beam.
All you wanna do is SCREAM!
You wonder if they can hear you.
Maybe the days you had numbered were through.
SCREAM if you have to.
Cry if it's what you must do.
All the pain hidden inside.
Fake smiles to complete the outside.
Maybe it's tim3es to do waht you need to do.
It's time I realize,
My life is over due.

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TaylorWintryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 22, 2013 at 2:32 pm
My favorite line is the last line. I realllllly really liked that. Also, the like that talks about "an empty bag" reminds me of the beginning of "Firework" by Katy Perry... Kind of the same theme there. But I love this poem. Super deep, great vocab, etc etc. nice job.
TheUnspoken1 replied...
Nov. 26, 2013 at 8:43 am
Thank you♥ Means a lot.
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