Losing you

July 22, 2013
By BlackRosetears BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
BlackRosetears BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Give In"


Free my soul
Lose my grip on you
Take me from this make it end
A never ending life to hold

The light
is all I have
Beaming through the night
All alone

In a crowed room
In sea of faces
Judgeing me
On how I speak how listen how I dress

Don't know who I am
One of a-kind
Only me I can give

But its never enough
Don't you know
that the lies are finding the truth
makeing it hurt

Never knew
what was yours
Till it left
Cold and abandoned
Screaming out someone or anyone to feed the empty soul

Left behind
But you're never alone
Someones always there for you just being ingnoed waiting for let them in
always watching
Can't hide it under the rug
You're gonna get cought

Sooner or later
I won't be here to pick up the pices of your remaining life

Free my soul
Lose my grip on you
Take from this make it end
A never ending life to hold
Again


The author's comments:
I made this about a friend I have always makeing the wrong choices

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on Jul. 25 2013 at 6:30 pm
BlackRosetears BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Give In"

Thanks :)!

on Jul. 25 2013 at 6:28 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

This is really good your lyrics are amazing but have an erie sad tone to. When should i suspect this to be the song everyone's listening to? i liked it all 5/5 rating




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