begin with the finish

January 4, 2013
By Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Do not follow those who follow others for they are only followers themselves.


Chorus
begin with the finish, ending every minute, wasting seconds of my time you should end it with the finish.

Verse
When you start talking,begin with the finish, your words are not heard, because your voice is so skiddish, i was once a little bird on a lonely mission, now im a warrior on a silence demolition,

Chorus
begin with the finish, ending every minute, wasting seconds of my time you should end it with the finish,

My patience you should fear because at the ending it is near,
my friends and family i leave afar, never addicted or lost in the bar.


The author's comments:
one of my songs hope you like thx

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on Feb. 25 2013 at 1:11 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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"I can do anything!"

I like it a lot! Keep up the good work!

on Jan. 15 2013 at 5:30 pm
Rolledthestone SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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"You hypocrite, first take the plank out of your own eye, and then you will see clearly to remove the speck from your brother’s eye." (Matthew 7:5) and "All the poeple who supported slavery were free, all the people who support abortion live..."

Wish I could write songs like that. Would loved to hear it with music behind, not really good at hearing what it would sound like by the lyrics are spectacular. A little guitar or piano and it's golden.

on Jan. 9 2013 at 2:53 pm
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Do not follow those who follow others for they are only followers themselves.

Thx!! i really appreciate it

3dancer SILVER said...
on Jan. 9 2013 at 2:02 pm
3dancer SILVER, Windsor, Colorado
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"Imagination will often carry us to worlds that we never were. But without it we go nowhere!"

Wow! This is really good! :) I like it.


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