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begin with the finish

Chorus
begin with the finish, ending every minute, wasting seconds of my time you should end it with the finish.

Verse
When you start talking,begin with the finish, your words are not heard, because your voice is so skiddish, i was once a little bird on a lonely mission, now im a warrior on a silence demolition,

Chorus
begin with the finish, ending every minute, wasting seconds of my time you should end it with the finish,

My patience you should fear because at the ending it is near,
my friends and family i leave afar, never addicted or lost in the bar.



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redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 1:11 pm:
I like it a lot! Keep up the good work!
 
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3dancer This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 9, 2013 at 2:02 pm:
Wow! This is really good! :) I like it.
 
Lawless-FlameRose replied...
Jan. 9, 2013 at 2:53 pm :
Thx!! i really appreciate it
 
Rolledthestone This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 15, 2013 at 5:30 pm :
Wish I could write songs like that. Would loved to hear it with music behind, not really good at hearing what it would sound like by the lyrics are spectacular. A little guitar or piano and it's golden.
 
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