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I Cry

Verse one:
You turned my world upside down
Nobody can help me now
You broke my heart in two
And left without a reason

Verse two:
I always gave you my all
I ended up with nothing at all
So why did I give you my time,
If you were just gonna leave me behind?

Chorus
Now I'm layin' here in my hurt
Drowning in my tears
Broken down by you
Seems to me like you never cared
So look at me now
Look at the damage you've caused
Can't you see that I loved you?
You made me cry

Verse three:
Should I even bother
Cryin' over you
Pourin' out my tears
When I know you'll never return

Verse four:
So when do I stop
Grieving over you
Should I give up now
And move on

Chorus
Now I'm layin' here in my hurt
Drowning in my tears
Broken down by you
Seems to me like you never cared
So look at me now
Look at the damage you've caused
Can't you see that I loved you
You made me cry

Verse five:
Did you ever love me
Did you ever even care
I gave you my heart
And you tore it apart
So look at me
What do you see
The compliments you gave,
Were they part of your game?


Chorus
Now I'm layin' here in my hurt
Drowning in my tears
Broken down by you
Seems to me like you never cared
So look at me now
Look at the damage you've caused
Can't you see that I loved you
You made me cry

End:
Now I'm layin' here wonderin'
What I did wrong
I'm crying



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Amber D. said...
Oct. 6, 2012 at 9:35 am:
Katie-jo, I wrote the song, but I can't play an instrument just sing and dance.  I put it up on Teenink so people would put their own music and beat to it. Thank you so much I am glad you like my song, just put your own style to it and rock out.
 
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Katie-jo said...
Oct. 4, 2012 at 10:06 am:
WOW, this was amazing! Really, really beautiful! I am really sorry for you, though, I hope you'll feel better soon, and I hope this song'll make you feel better! Maybe you could put music to it? I'd love to know maybe the chords for it or something, it would be fun to play it! But yes, this song was simply AMAZING, there's nothing else to describe it! Please check out some of my work if you get the chance, too! Thanks!
 
Katie-jo replied...
Oct. 4, 2012 at 10:07 am :
Oops, don't know why it posted twice, but....oh, well! I've added this to my favorites, by the way, it's soo good!
 
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Katie-jo said...
Oct. 4, 2012 at 10:06 am:
WOW, this was amazing! Really, really beautiful! I am really sorry for you, though, I hope you'll feel better soon, and I hope this song'll make you feel better! Maybe you could put music to it? I'd love to know maybe the chords for it or something, it would be fun to play it! But yes, this song was simply AMAZING, there's nothing else to describe it! Please check out some of my work if you get the chance, too! Thanks!
 
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