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Fire Fever

It starts, with a spark
A shine in the dark hour
Sets off a chain, and I’m
A little scared of the power

The temperature rises
And I grow a little bit tired
I glisten like a diamond as the
The heat becomes higher

Fires grow brighter
Climb so much higher
All the fires
Never ever tired

The flames lick me
My burns begin to swell
Outside, I’m totally fine
But inside, not as well

I think that I’m
Catching a fever
From this devastating devilish heat
I think that I’m
Losing hope, ‘cause these
Fires seem impossible to beat



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IlovemeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 4, 2012 at 5:52 am:
Loved it! :)
 
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Ms. Thiers said...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 8:05 am:
This is amazing! You are a wonderful and talented writer.  I am so impressed.  I would love to hear the song!  Great job!
 
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PurpleOreo said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 6:39 pm:
Nice! Like how it flows. Really cacthy. Keep writting!!
 
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dancemomspotter12 said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 6:01 pm:
loved it penguin...was really good...when i post something i will tell u ...  
 
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ShadowpomThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 5:58 pm:
okay, awesome awesome imagery and the meter is really precise! i love! gave it five stars! keep it up  
 
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jazznickat said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 4:33 pm:
Nice work Anguth! :) -Jasmine
 
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Julia said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 3:00 pm:
Love the deep feeling!
 
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Taros_Lover said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 10:31 am:
Wow That's amazing. It's different but interesting. I think that this poem actually sounds better than something proffessional done.
 
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