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You live so far away from me,
all the way on the other side of the globe.

I don’t know when I’ll see you again.

You live so far away from me,
you have friends I don’t even know.

I wonder if you know my feelings for you.

You speak a different language,
at least I know that.

But you will still never be mine.

I don’t know how my love could be so foolish
but I can’t stop loving you now.

I can’t stop loving you now.



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Dr.FeelGood said...
Dec. 9, 2013 at 11:38 am:
great job but i agree with krasota you could really spice it up
 
samiasaskia24 replied...
Dec. 9, 2013 at 9:08 pm :
Yeah, I get that! The metaphors would make it a little longer and more poetic! Thanks guys!
 
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KrasotaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 15, 2013 at 8:47 pm:
Since it is song lyrics, I think it could've been a little longer (unless you were to have a lot of instrumental parts), but overall I think this was a relateable poem. My suggestion would be to include some metaphors in here to spice it up a bit. :D Otherwise, great job!
 
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UncreativeOne said...
Aug. 9, 2012 at 7:09 pm:
i feel as if this is more a poetry thing than lyrics. but could be a chorus part. I like it. I can relate(:
 
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