Unknowns (unfinished)

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Running through darkness
I want to break out.
I call your name, and I
scream, and I shout.
I need to see you.
I want you near.
I will hold on
until you disappear.

Tripping and sliding
and falling down,
I reach for your hand, but
you're not around.
Bruises and scratches,
I tend to my wounds.
I carry on
I run through the tombs
of the unknowns.





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walternash3 said...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 9:18 pm
this is REALLY good! keep writing!
 
Bri.And said...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 12:18 pm
Very deep. You are an excellent writer. :)
 
justme242 said...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 12:14 pm
it is very good and i love the rhyming 
 
DanielM said...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 7:45 am
Great job. I liked the message. Great rhyming. Suggestion: expand on these lyrics
 
hopelessromantic11 said...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 7:44 am
This very nice poem
 
hippiechick99 said...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 7:44 am
I think this is really great, and you should add a little more. I'm guessing you were already doing that though. What you have so far is beautiful and intriging, I'm looking forward to the rest :)
 
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