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What is my name?
Why am i here?
Am i insane?
Finally giving in to fear
How do i go on?
Do i ignore my past?
I am a pawn
Is it over at last?
Im so very tired
I dont know what to do
Diffrently my brain is wired
This is all very new
To all who care
Now i say goodbye
Dont even know where
Except to soar through the sky




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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 31, 2013 at 12:37 am:
This is kinda choppy and blunt, but in a why, it's effective. Good thoughts, good be better grammar and stuff, but I'd give this a 4/5
 
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LiraDaeris said...
May 3, 2013 at 12:43 am:
It's a good reaction to have. To make the transition stronger, use words that have to do with heights going from low to high, or low all the way to and contrast with he idea of flying. As a suggestion. You may think of something I've never thought of. You have some great ideas for your works!
 
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