Don't Fail Me Now

January 20, 2012
when smile people frown, when u fly they just wanna shot u down, so i keep my feet on the ground and my head in the clouds so God please don't fail me now





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JaneCapelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 8:46 pm
Hi!!!!!!! :D :P lol, okay, so you have a few glitches...missed a word, shouldn't have used slang....but otherwise, i think this is starting to grow on me. =) hmm...4/5 :) --your best friend in re.al life
 
theviruz203 replied...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 9:58 pm
thank you jane and im just so used to the slang but i can change that
 
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