The Snob

January 9, 2012
His eyes just glare as he stands in line,
'Cause lunch crowds just aren't worth his time.
You glance his way, he squints at you:
Don't you realize he's got cooler things to do?
His vulture-gaze preys on self-worth;
He's been above this crowd since birth.
His voiceless clothes accentuate his face, that face, that poker face
That rolls those brown eyes as he struts from the line,
'Cause none of us are worth his time.

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wordjunkie said...
Mar. 10, 2012 at 6:03 pm
I loved it! I know someone just like that x) It was well written and I like the rhym sceme.
aurum_angel said...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 1:22 pm
I really liked the rhyme scheme and liked the idea behind it. Don't we all know a snob like that...
Falling.Up. said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 12:10 pm
this was good, although the fifth line seems out of place with the rhythm. but i love the idea of it, and i felt that way too when i was in public school
JoPepper said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 4:50 pm
The rhyming was very good and had a nice beat to it (if that makes any sense). Good job !!! Keep Writing!!!! :D
Alexa19 said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 4:22 pm
I loved the last sentence! It was a very powerful ending!
Artemisia replied...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 2:24 pm
Thanks! I really appreciate your feedback! :) Is there anything of yours you'd like me to read?
Alexa19 replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 9:34 pm
You're welcome. And if you'd like, you can read my song "Desperate Measures." I never really know if anything of mine is any good, so constructive critisism is welcome :)
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