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Lets go fly a kite
And pretend we are all merry
Lets go sing a song
And pick a wild berry

Lets hold out our hands
And unite with one another
Lets pretend we're family
A sister and a brother

Lets pretend, Lets pretend
My life is full of pretending things
Lets pretend, Lets pretend
Lets pretend we're rejoicing

Lets pretend we like
Lets pretend we love
Lets pretend we're a soaring bird
A white, crystal bird





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Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:13 am

Now this is a really really really good poem! XD I luv it.

-Lilac

 
Im--NOT--RayynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 6:57 pm
I like the repetativeness of this, you used that well. The end is interesting, I don't really understand the ctystal part. It's overall really interesting
 
tweetiebruce replied...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 12:39 am
Do you have any ideas for what I could change it to? I couldn't think of any at the time. I was thinking pure and beautiful.....
 
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