Pretending

November 21, 2011
By tweetiebruce PLATINUM, Sydney, Other
tweetiebruce PLATINUM, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like music - You can make mistakes so you try again. But when the piece can't be helped you try again another time.


Lets go fly a kite
And pretend we are all merry
Lets go sing a song
And pick a wild berry

Lets hold out our hands
And unite with one another
Lets pretend we're family
A sister and a brother

Lets pretend, Lets pretend
My life is full of pretending things
Lets pretend, Lets pretend
Lets pretend we're rejoicing

Lets pretend we like
Lets pretend we love
Lets pretend we're a soaring bird
A white, crystal bird


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on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:13 am
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons make grape juice. Then sit back and watch everyone look at you in amazement. :)

Now this is a really really really good poem! XD I luv it.

-Lilac


on Nov. 27 2011 at 12:39 am
tweetiebruce PLATINUM, Sydney, Other
24 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like music - You can make mistakes so you try again. But when the piece can't be helped you try again another time.

Do you have any ideas for what I could change it to? I couldn't think of any at the time. I was thinking pure and beautiful.....

on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:57 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

I like the repetativeness of this, you used that well. The end is interesting, I don't really understand the ctystal part. It's overall really interesting


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