Lost and Moving Forward

November 17, 2011

Lost in the depths of who I am,

I'm rushin' into this, without a plan

I'm lost and I can't seem to find my way

Out



I'm lost

So lost

I don't know where to turn so I keep going

I'm lost

So lost

There's no where to go so I keep going...forward



Death is too cold, I don't even want it

The sky is blue but my blood is red and

Nothing seems to work right anymore

Lost



Lost in the depths of who I am,

I'm rushin' into this, without a plan

I'm lost and I can't seem to find my way

Out



I'm lost

So lost

I don't know where to turn so I keep going

I'm lost

So lost

There's no where to go so I keep going...forward



I'm lost

(I'm lost)

So lost

(So lost)

I don't know where to turn so I keep going

(I can't find my way through)

Lost

So lost

There's no where to go so I keep going...



Forward


The author's comments:
Written off the top of my head and unedited. Originally posted in the forums as a random post.

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on Dec. 15 2011 at 5:03 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan"
-by. Blood On The Dance Floor

wow, this made me feel like how i did when my best friend/ex told me tht he has cancer.......and when i thought about it as i was reading the poem i stopped for a moment and looked down at the scars on my arm as a silent tear fell.

on Dec. 4 2011 at 8:29 pm
reyess_anai BRONZE, Corona, California
4 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every deep thinker is more afraid of being understood than misunderstood." Nietzsche

Really liked the repetition and the entire concept :)

on Dec. 2 2011 at 1:14 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

So this only has about 90 views?  Wierd.  This must be one of TI's best-kept secrets...

on Nov. 29 2011 at 10:10 pm
HateKnuckle SILVER, Peru, New York
9 articles 0 photos 97 comments

I really like this. It reminds me of what I thought when I was going through a rough time. I didn't know what to do and there was definitely some blood.

 


on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:02 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments

I, for one, enjoyed this. As far as song lyrics go, they're simple without being beaten over the head repetitve. (This pleases me greatly XD)

I like the "message" -- though its never safe to assume it was an intended one. But what I personally got from it, I liked. (I'd say I totally connected and OMG I feel the same way ... but that's not too important.)

I will now busy myself with imagining music to this. Well done.


on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:54 am
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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I don't see how this doesn't have more comments.


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