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Why do we have to lose the ones that we love,
I wish her back though she’s in a better place above,
She cared a lot about her family and friends,
She went to church every Sunday to be cleansed of her few sins,
Losing her forever is not how I see it,
She will always be present just her soul and her spirit





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@m@nd@ said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 9:07 am
im sure she knows how much you care. i really like the way i felt your pain in a short moment.
 
VegHead said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 8:35 pm
Just right. I am sure your friend would love to see this. It seems very true to your own emotion and is simple yet effective.
 
SanamSheriff said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 11:46 pm
And it portrays raw emotion. Thats exactly what a piece of work is supposed to do.
 
SanamSheriff said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 11:46 pm
This is really good. It conveys the message clearly. Good job
 
bubbles.. replied...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 7:21 am
i really like this. it touches the heartstrigs;)
 
bubbles.. replied...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 7:22 am

i spelled that wrong *strings*

 

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