Lizzie

October 19, 2011
By Cody_Goelz PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
Cody_Goelz PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Only God Can Judge Me
2pac Amaru Shakur

life goes on
2pac Amaru Shakur


Why do we have to lose the ones that we love,
I wish her back though she’s in a better place above,
She cared a lot about her family and friends,
She went to church every Sunday to be cleansed of her few sins,
Losing her forever is not how I see it,
She will always be present just her soul and her spirit

The author's comments:
My Friend passed away august 4 2011 at the age of 17

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on Dec. 22 2011 at 9:07 am
AmandaaPandaa GOLD, Glen Cove, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"what lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us"!!

im sure she knows how much you care. i really like the way i felt your pain in a short moment.

VegHead SILVER said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 8:35 pm
VegHead SILVER, Como, Texas
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Just right. I am sure your friend would love to see this. It seems very true to your own emotion and is simple yet effective.

bubbles.. said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 7:22 am
bubbles.., Warren, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Dont forget the bad. learn from it.

i spelled that wrong *strings*

 

0.o


bubbles.. said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 7:21 am
bubbles.., Warren, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Dont forget the bad. learn from it.

i really like this. it touches the heartstrigs;)

fdbfdsf said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 11:46 pm
fdbfdsf, Bangalore, Other
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And it portrays raw emotion. Thats exactly what a piece of work is supposed to do.

fdbfdsf said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 11:46 pm
fdbfdsf, Bangalore, Other
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This is really good. It conveys the message clearly. Good job




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