Promise me something

September 13, 2011
By blakrose PLATINUM, Anchorage, Alaska
blakrose PLATINUM, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"the biggest mistake you can make in life is to give up." - Rebekah Hanson
"think outside the shoe." - Jessica Cox
"angel wings break, so fly while you can." - Rose Smith


I cant explain how i feel,
'cause its just way to much,
it feels so new so real.
i melt away with just one touch.

so never wake me from this dream,
'cause ive never felt so alive,
so keep me floating down this stream.
its the only way that i'll servive.

(chorus) so baby stay with me,
stay close and near,
and promise me something, say youll never lie,
promise me something wont you dear,
stay with me, dont leave untill i die.

ive never felt the way i do with you,
so trust me baby when i say my love is true. (r*2)

(chorus)

ive seen the bright and happy,
and ive seen the down and sad,
and i love you so much that im going mad.(r*2)

(chorus)

yeah ive never felt this way,
like i do with you...so promise me something and i'll stay true. (r*2)

The author's comments:
this was dedicated to one of my ex boyfriends.

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on Sep. 20 2011 at 12:07 pm
blakrose PLATINUM, Anchorage, Alaska
29 articles 5 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the biggest mistake you can make in life is to give up." - Rebekah Hanson
"think outside the shoe." - Jessica Cox
"angel wings break, so fly while you can." - Rose Smith

i hope i can post more!

thank you for your comment.


on Sep. 17 2011 at 3:12 pm
nikkigonefishin GOLD, Los Angeles, California
17 articles 1 photo 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" A smile is worth a thousand words"
" The purpose of the writer is to keep civilization from destroying itself."- Albert Camus

The emotion in your song is beautiful! I wish i could hear it being sung. I also loved the rhymes. I hope to hear more from you :)


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