Tears

August 8, 2011
Dropping, Dropping, Dropping.

Falling, Falling, Falling.

The tears in my soul will stay.

Dripping, Dripping, Dripping.

Ticking, Ticking, Ticking.

Running out of time. . .

Drip Drop, Drip Drop, Drip Drop.

Run, Run, Run.

Drip Drop, Drip Drop, Drip Drop.

Please don’t go!

Please Don’t go!

Away!

Drip Drop, Drip Drop,

Running out of time. . .

Drip Drop, Drip Drip.

Your on my mind.

all of the time.

Please don’t go!

Please don’t go!

I love you. . .

Tears, Tears, Tears.

love, love love.

No time at all. . .





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Raytheraym said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 4:23 pm
Great use of repetition!
 
jellotinisjiggly24This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 4:25 pm
Thank you!!!!! :)(:
 
Bambi67 said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 3:56 pm
very nice!!
 
jellotinisjiggly24This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 4:04 pm
Thanks a bunch!!!! :)(: oh and my new user name is: actually now it is: jellotinisjiggly24
 
writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 3:01 pm
please comment on this and rate it. i enjoy reading comments and feedback. :)(:
 
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