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Road Burn

Crimson shades of nostalgia

Feeding into insanity

Jigsaw catacomb weighing on my mind

Wrestle with the reins of blasphemy



Dragon of the west breathin' fire down my spine

Killing civilians out of rhyme like it's 1969

F***ing with stability erase the great confusion

Going left going right it's just a great illusion



Figurehead voodoo man wicked one of evil

Disease man for the righteous

Blood bound for the the wheels I ride

It brings me peace of mind





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BriarRose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 7, 2011 at 7:42 pm

Dang.  Just dang.  I like this a lot.  You create a steady beat and the words really drew me in.  It could easily be longer; i found myself wanting more when it ended.  Also, thank you for the vocab ;] love that

 

Keep writing.  Seriously.

 

--BriarRose @>--,---

 
luvkittehz8P This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 9:20 pm
I love the rhyme scheme and how you use words that most people don't even know. I honestly had to get out a dictionary for a few!=D It makes the song unique
 
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