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Biscuit

By , Tomahawk, WI
Your deep brown eyes have woven a snare
I’m captured by your biscuit hair
But you can’t give just one care
To my legs, running, running after you

I see what you have inside
I reached out, you only shied
away, and I cried
when I realized how much I loved you.

I can’t let you go, I already know
I want to see much more of you.
I see the kindness in your eyes, so how is it surprise
That the crush I had has infectiously grew

You know how hopeless I am at love.
I cannot flirt, I poke and shove
You act like a startled dove
And just fly away, away

How do I show you how I feel?
This love, this pain, it doesn’t seem real
Your ignorance just makes me blue
I’ll have to settle for watching you





Lustfully…





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Violetrose said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 6:30 pm
I thought this was really good.  ;)
 
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Aug. 13, 2011 at 9:09 am
Thanks! :)
 
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