"My Best Friend Satan"

July 23, 2011
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You make me lock my door.
Congratulations, you did it again.
Shut inside wishing for someone to adore
me. Is it a sin?
You make the devil look like my best friend.
Anyone but you
will do.
You're helpless all right.
That makes you wanna fight.

I wanna hide,
Locked away like a princess bride.
I cry.
There's no one to save me.
No one to set me free.
Oh please, oh please-
Don't you see
What you do to me?

I wanna be as far from you as I can
You make me sick
But, hey, thanks
You give me inspiration
No need for contemplation
One look at you
Will truly do

I wanna hide
Locked away like princess bride.
I cry.
There's no one to save me,
No one to set me free.
Oh please, oh please-
Don't you see
What you do to me?





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Kiki_McGee said...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 10:43 am
Oh, I like it. Definitely not as dark as I expected from the title, but amazing nonetheless. I must admit that I adore the rythm and the repeating stanza.
 
Indiewriter This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 22, 2013 at 4:59 pm
Thank you!(:
 
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Aug. 8, 2011 at 1:56 am
Surprisingly , I love it. The title is intimidating , but it was easy to get over that. I like how this poem is about venting out your feelings. I think it's a very relatable piece and I wish you had more comments on it. It's not as intense as the title suggests , I actually kinda liked reading it.
 
Indiewriter This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 22, 2013 at 5:00 pm
Thank you!(:
 
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