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Rejection can kill you
So why aren't I dead?
I stare at the ceiling and
bleed in my bed.
Rejection can kill you
so why am I here?
Still breathing and crying
my hot blooded tears
Rejection can kill you
so can deception and lies
Maybe, could it be,
I see things though her eyes
NOW!
I know I've been wrong
so very long
as I bleed out this lyrics
from my hurt, girl I wrote you a song
NOW!
I am here to make wrongs right
so to keep our love strong
I will stand up and fight.




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Blue4This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 5:43 pm:
This. Is. Amazing.
 
dia.dreamer replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 2:40 pm :
This IS amazing. in just a few lines, you showed your feelings so perfectly. love it! check out my poems too. :)
 
Niarra_Nightmare replied...
Sept. 4, 2011 at 9:13 pm :
Will do! Thanks follow poet.
 
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Lola_BlackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 2:45 pm:
The emotion in your writing gives me goosebumps! Keep writing!!!
 
Niarra_Nightmare replied...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 3:23 pm :
As you wish it, so it shall be. Thank you, Lola Black for inspiring me to keep writing.
 
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