July 1, 2011
By missyrayne BRONZE, Rosamond, California
missyrayne BRONZE, Rosamond, California
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Favorite Quote:
never give up

in the night
there's a light
in the distance
is stop and listen
an inaudible sound
and you look around
a whisper in the air
there's no one there

i see a light
in the middle of night
its very bright
ill follow till it burns out of sight
is this a dream?
what does it mean?
where did it go?
is it down below?

during the night
there's no light
its so dark
i stepped on bark
I'm scared of the sight
so i began to recite
the past of thee
light i see

The author's comments:
i wrote this article/poem because i was walking with a very good friend of mine and i seen a light way out in the distance. so what i did is took this idea and wrote a poem having to do with this. i would hope you all like this. just a small light inspired me to do a lot so please enjoy!

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hypermagical said...
on Jun. 20 2012 at 6:39 am
hypermagical, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can quote me on that.

Well done, Missy!

on Jun. 18 2012 at 6:48 pm
Jappyalldayeveryday, Detroit, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
They say that good things take time, but really great things happen in the blink of an eye

This is cute! The feel of two good friends walking in the night is definitely there, and I loved the way the words flowed together. Great job!

on Jun. 4 2012 at 3:46 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

i like this. simple and sweet. cute!


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