The Song He Sang

June 9, 2011
The golden light dances from the sky
As your silver sigh leaves impressions on my mind
As your frozen breath escapes your lips
Mine are sealed tight
(2nd time): *

The sinking sun has a lovely glow
Like your lips our footprints in the snow
Start far apart, but in the end so close
I’ll have you know this was better than I hoped

You can’t forget him

But you’re not sure he’d remember your name

Don’t cry, don’t cry little girl

It’s well known that this world’s not sane

A dying star shot through the sky
All the other stars lost their luster that night
I held on tight, but it died so quickly
It burned so bright, but it will never repeat for me

*What’s inside I can’t deny so I better not try…
You never lose, you never lose
You never lose, you never lose
Somebody who never lost you

And every song, and every song
And every right note, and every wrong
Is a love note, keep holding on

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Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 2:51 am
This was so lovely. I enjoyed it thouroughly. Your rhyming is well done , and you have no visible spelling errors. What a great poem/ song !
musicispassion said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 12:51 am
u have a way with words graet work
Robyn97 said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 12:30 pm
This was so awesome! I love the words that were used, and how you used them. 6/5.
Zildj This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 9:27 pm
thanks     :)
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