Crashing Down

May 25, 2011
By Kaleighgirl97 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
Kaleighgirl97 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When the rich wage war its the poor who die."














- Jean-Paul Sartre.


I walk in the room and my vision blurs. A red tint consumes everything and it seems as if teh walls are burning.
Chorus:
The walls are crashing down, tumbling to the ground, burning all around me. Flashes of yellow, orange, and red. So hot I feel I am ash now.

The walls are closing in turning the room into a cage too small for any animal, let alone a human being. My lungs are bieng deprivd of air and instead filled with smoke.

Chorus

My heart explodes from my chest. Thats what it feels like when the walls of your life come crashing down on you.
Crashing down.
Crashing down.
Burning to the ground.
Thats what it feels like when your walls come crashing down.



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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 8:57 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I like this and I'd love to hear the music to it someday! Great work!

Check out my stuff sometime please?


on Jul. 7 2011 at 4:45 pm
Kaleighgirl97 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When the rich wage war its the poor who die."














- Jean-Paul Sartre.

thank you i showed it to my friedns one day in a notebook and she told me it sounded more like a song tahn a poem so i entered it that way otherwise it would be a poem right now

on Jul. 6 2011 at 2:53 pm
CieraDesiree GOLD, Hagerstown, Indiana
17 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye only makes the whole world blind.
You never know what you have until it's gone.

Nice=)) I like it.

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 11:40 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

Nice..:) your good..

on Jul. 5 2011 at 12:10 pm
Kaleighgirl97 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When the rich wage war its the poor who die."














- Jean-Paul Sartre.

thank you. sorry bout the typo in the first verse i cant type very well.

on Jun. 23 2011 at 8:50 pm
Scribbler-of-Dreams PLATINUM, Brandon, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Love isn't everything we want, but it's everything we need....

Stong...very strong.


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