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trusted you

May 21, 2011
By musiclover29 BRONZE, Bloomington, Illinois
musiclover29 BRONZE, Bloomington, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"life's not the breaths you take but the moments that take your breath away''


the last words you said were sick
sick because the words before were magical
I thought you were there for me
I thought you were my best friend
you said we would always be sisters
I take all the words I believed you said back
you were the only one who knew my deepest secrets
you would tell me yours
you said if you didn't have me you would die
now i'm dead just thinking about the awful things you did to me
now I am dead just thinking about all we had
and all you just threw away
all the terrible things you said made me go dead
I thought I had you through anything
I trusted you
I believed in you
I stood up for you
I spilled my heart and soul out to you
I gave you all I had
this is what you give back to me
evil words and hatred
now who can I trust after this
after what you did to me
I know there are some out there who will treat me good
you did not make me lose myself
I know there is some to trust
people out there who are better than you.

The author's comments:
this peace was written after my best friend said
terrible things and put me down all the time. She
would call me her best friend but she would always
do something awful to me. I would always go back
to her even after all she did to me. I gave her so many chances. This time it is very different. This time I don't want to go back because I know she will just keep doing it. I'm stronger now and I hope this helps everybody in my situation be strong and let go of the negativity. I've realized that I do not deserve to be treated that way. I hope you like my writing.thanks for reading.

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on Jun. 21 2011 at 10:12 pm
Letusbelennon BRONZE, Tucson, Florida
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I really liked this and I have been through similar things. It's always hard to have friends treat you badly, and I like that you wrote about it! Keep up the great work!