Bring him back to me.

March 31, 2011
By chris94 SILVER, Pigeon Forge, Tennessee
chris94 SILVER, Pigeon Forge, Tennessee
5 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
tomarrow is today that you worried about yesterday.

and

Greeks: prepare to die!!for our arrows will block out the sun!!
Persians: then we shall battle in the shadows!!


She was only 6 years old when she watched her daddy die. She folded her hands and bowed her head to pray:

"Lord my god, will you please don't take my daddy away. I know that he wasn't a very good man, but he's all i got, and I don't want to be alone. So Lord please... bring him back to me."

when she got done praying she heard a small sob. So she looked down at her daddy and saw him crying. He took her hands and began to pray:

"Lord my God, I know i haven't been the best man there is, but I'm asking you now to forgive my selfish ways."

When he got done praying they raised their hands up in the air and said "AMEN!"


The author's comments:
When I was a little girl I had lost a lot of family to death. So wrote this because I wanted people to know that i had lost people special in my life.

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chris94 SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:50 am
chris94 SILVER, Pigeon Forge, Tennessee
5 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
tomarrow is today that you worried about yesterday.

and

Greeks: prepare to die!!for our arrows will block out the sun!!
Persians: then we shall battle in the shadows!!

thank u...

Lovergirl GOLD said...
on May. 3 2011 at 11:15 am
Lovergirl GOLD, Gretna, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"don't jugde and ye won't be jugde" matthew 7:1
"If you don't know the trees you will get lost in the forest, but if you don't know the stories you will get lost in life' -Siderian Proverb

tis makes me expresses a lot of my emotin in i dont show them much

 


on May. 2 2011 at 4:11 pm
Cerberus SILVER, Middletown, Ohio
8 articles 3 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be a leader, not a follower."

my condolences go out to you.

on May. 2 2011 at 11:09 am
redneckromeo PLATINUM, Centerville, Iowa
26 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you is used way to much kinda like I'm sorry"
"love comes with a price and the price is pain"

this is a good poem its sad when you loose ppl close to you

on May. 2 2011 at 11:08 am
redneckromeo PLATINUM, Centerville, Iowa
26 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you is used way to much kinda like I'm sorry"
"love comes with a price and the price is pain"

this is good and sad

on Apr. 29 2011 at 10:22 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one's mistakes." Oscar Wilde

"The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame."

Sorry that was supposed to be a new comment. :/

on Apr. 29 2011 at 10:21 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one's mistakes." Oscar Wilde

"The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame."

i love hpw this expresses a lot of emotion. :)

 


J.Chap BRONZE said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 1:22 pm
J.Chap BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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What a beautiful poem. I think it shows a wonderful faith in the lord, who works in mysterious ways. I loved this poem, it spoke to my heart! Keep up the amazing work!


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