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This place smells so new to me
the air is so unbreathed
No one has ever walked
on these floors
It looks so empty
Let's fill it
with love
The new melodies of my life
will echo in these walls

CHORUS
It's still unknown
but we'll call this place home
It's strange. It's beautiful.
From now on
this place is called home

Sweet, sweet home
I'm still tasting it
Now there will be love in the air
so we can turn
this place into a home,
to where we belong.

(CHORUS:
It's still unknown
but we'll call this place home
It's strange. It's beautiful.
From now on
this place is called home



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Mcflyjr said...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 10:10 pm
My one problem with this poem is just the short lines. You can have more words on a line, but other than that it's great
 
Papi said...
May 21, 2011 at 5:41 pm
Me encanto Cami, que bueno que te guste tu casa
 
Dominicano_Loco said...
Apr. 3, 2011 at 2:18 pm
Very nice. :) really gives a feeling of being home with the family.
 
Osqui said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 10:55 am
Very nice, keep the good work.
 
Nandi said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 8:25 am
great song! I loved it
 
TanGem This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 8:54 pm
The part about being able to taste sweet home in the air is... magnificent. :)
 
Nora Aja said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 7:57 pm
Congratulations Cami!
 
Sammiekay said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 4:57 pm

Honestly? i wouldn't have changed a thing its really good!

but i mighhtt have added more to it! its a little short but you made the point come alive!!keep writing its really good:)

 
Camii replied...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 4:04 pm
thanks,, your work is good too!
 
Leonor.Emmalyn said...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 8:52 am
I love it, and totally understand what you're saying!
 
Camii replied...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 11:08 am
thank you:)
 
Gabriela T. said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 7:09 pm
I loved it!! keep writing
 
Camii replied...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 11:09 am
thanks!               
 
gabiii ♥ said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 5:21 pm

It's great!! i loved it ,,,, you have a lot of talent ... can you teach me how to write songs?? :) hahahahah just kidding ;)

 

 

 
HighOnEverythingButLove said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 2:35 pm
i loved it its amazing
 
Veronique replied...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 1:19 pm
I love it so much! If you sing, you should record it for youtube(: what genre is it?
 
Camii replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 11:28 am
thankss (: i think it's pop or it could be country pop too (or just acoustic),, i'm not sure yet,, what do you think?
 
Raytheraym said...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 3:09 pm
Very good! I really like it.
 
Camii replied...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 3:20 pm
thanks:)                                 
 
lilmartz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 12:30 pm
*claps hands* Great job! My favorite lines were "It's still unknown but we'll call this place home! The entire first half of the song was golden. Nice work :)
 
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