This place is called home

February 24, 2011
By Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
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This place smells so new to me
the air is so unbreathed
No one has ever walked
on these floors
It looks so empty
Let's fill it
with love
The new melodies of my life
will echo in these walls

CHORUS
It's still unknown
but we'll call this place home
It's strange. It's beautiful.
From now on
this place is called home

Sweet, sweet home
I'm still tasting it
Now there will be love in the air
so we can turn
this place into a home,
to where we belong.

(CHORUS:
It's still unknown
but we'll call this place home
It's strange. It's beautiful.
From now on
this place is called home


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Mcflyjr BRONZE said...
on Feb. 7 2012 at 10:10 pm
Mcflyjr BRONZE, Wilmington, Massachusetts
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My one problem with this poem is just the short lines. You can have more words on a line, but other than that it's great

Papi said...
on May. 21 2011 at 5:41 pm
Me encanto Cami, que bueno que te guste tu casa

on Apr. 3 2011 at 2:18 pm
Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Live and learn, and when ya fall, Stand Strong and come back!"/"I'm goin to regrett this 1 tomorrow."

Very nice. :) really gives a feeling of being home with the family.

Osqui said...
on Apr. 2 2011 at 10:55 am
Very nice, keep the good work.

Nandi said...
on Apr. 2 2011 at 8:25 am
great song! I loved it

on Apr. 1 2011 at 8:54 pm
TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Love is not a feeling; it is a gift, an act, an ultimate sacrifice. -Me (Em)

The part about being able to taste sweet home in the air is... magnificent. :)

Nora Aja said...
on Apr. 1 2011 at 7:57 pm
Congratulations Cami!

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2011 at 11:09 am
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thanks!               

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2011 at 11:08 am
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thank you:)

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:04 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thanks,, your work is good too!

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:02 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
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THANKSS :)

on Mar. 21 2011 at 4:57 pm
Sammiekay SILVER, St. Peters, Missouri
8 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you are is not what you did." -Taylor Swift

Honestly? i wouldn't have changed a thing its really good!

but i mighhtt have added more to it! its a little short but you made the point come alive!!keep writing its really good:)


Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 19 2011 at 11:28 am
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
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thankss (: i think it's pop or it could be country pop too (or just acoustic),, i'm not sure yet,, what do you think?

on Mar. 18 2011 at 8:32 pm
Endless1996 GOLD, Bay City, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"sadness my dear is nothing but power, use it, and use it well" By Arnold Lee Elwood

awsome job!!! keep writing you have talent

on Mar. 18 2011 at 1:19 pm
OliviaShea GOLD, Lakewood, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind dont matter, and those who matter dont mind" "you know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams"

I love it so much! If you sing, you should record it for youtube(: what genre is it?

on Mar. 18 2011 at 8:52 am
LeonorEmmalyn, Arroyo Hondo, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"I hold with those who favor fire."
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, and I-- I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

I love it, and totally understand what you're saying!

on Mar. 13 2011 at 7:09 pm
Gabriela Talgham, Miami, Florida
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I loved it!! keep writing

gabiii ♥ said...
on Mar. 13 2011 at 5:21 pm

It's great!! i loved it ,,,, you have a lot of talent ... can you teach me how to write songs?? :) hahahahah just kidding ;)

 

 


on Mar. 13 2011 at 2:35 pm
Cammie45874 SILVER, Ohio City, Ohio
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i loved it its amazing

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 13 2011 at 1:17 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thank you !(:




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