Let it go

February 1, 2011
By austin wolfe BRONZE, Park City, Utah
austin wolfe BRONZE, Park City, Utah
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Let it go, take a breath, move your feet and take a step
Watch the ground move along underneath your feet...
Just watch the world go by through the window of your car
Chase the raindrops with your fingers and remember how to breathe...
You bight your nails and hold your head, tell yourself that you won’t cry
Put on an act for the world around you...
But a smile on your face has nothing to do with what you're feeling inside.

The author's comments:
For anyone who's ever felt the pain of heart break...

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on Feb. 23 2011 at 9:45 pm
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Dreaming is what makes the world go round"

really, really, really liked this!! i could see this being a hit song! good job, keep writing! can you comment some of my stuff as well? i'd greatly apreciate it =)

bjking1 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 23 2011 at 12:13 pm
bjking1 BRONZE, South Elgin, Illinois
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Your use of figurative language and personification is unmatchable! Sometimes i feel the exact way your poem depicts...unreal!

lollypops GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2011 at 7:49 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Live

great job i loved the fourth line

on Feb. 22 2011 at 3:25 pm
Elizabeth-Martin PLATINUM, Georgetown, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives me a reason to cry, I'll show life that I have 1000 reasons to smile.

Wow, this is powerful. So great. I love where you said to ''chase the raindrops with your fingers''. Great job, keep it up! (:




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