Let it go

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Let it go, take a breath, move your feet and take a step
Watch the ground move along underneath your feet...
Just watch the world go by through the window of your car
Chase the raindrops with your fingers and remember how to breathe...
You bight your nails and hold your head, tell yourself that you won’t cry
Put on an act for the world around you...
But a smile on your face has nothing to do with what you're feeling inside.





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dreamer9492 said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 9:45 pm
really, really, really liked this!! i could see this being a hit song! good job, keep writing! can you comment some of my stuff as well? i'd greatly apreciate it =)
 
bjking1 said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 12:13 pm
Your use of figurative language and personification is unmatchable! Sometimes i feel the exact way your poem depicts...unreal!
 
htrae22 said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 7:49 pm
great job i loved the fourth line
 
Elizabeth.Martin said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 3:25 pm
Wow, this is powerful. So great. I love where you said to ''chase the raindrops with your fingers''. Great job, keep it up! (:
 
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