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Ode to Seven

I want to paint my face a different shade of red
'Cause this magenta color doesn't fit my eyes
I wish I could stop acting like a maniac
'Cause it seems to push people away

Why doesn't anyone love me for who I really am?
I wish somebody would love me like I have always loved them
(I've always loved you)

This here flower is a lovely shade of blue
Do you love it like I love you?




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teenpoet8 said...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 7:18 pm:
Hi, xxSlimShadyxx!  This is Brooke.  thanks for checking out my poem oxygen.  This piece is very good...keep it up!
 
PieIsAwkward replied...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 4:47 pm :
Thanks so much! :]
 
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LunarRainstorm said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 1:10 am:
These lyrics are strangely interesting. I like them. =)
 
xxSlimShadyxx replied...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 8:46 pm :
Thank you. Strangeness is something I strive for.
 
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XBLGamerz said...
Jan. 28, 2011 at 10:09 am:
This is GOOD!
 
xxSlimShadyxx replied...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 8:47 pm :

Thank you!

I appreciate your use of Uppercase lettering! :]

 
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