teenage hearts

December 9, 2010
By barbarick32 BRONZE, Applgate, California
barbarick32 BRONZE, Applgate, California
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Girl you
Look so beautiful tonight
Under all the city lights
Looking for someone in this crowded room
Who’s looking for you too

and the alcohol never seems to work
but tonight I'm felling some magic in this whiskey bottle easing my foot on the throttle
finding you before this
night is over or we both end up sober is all i can do

And I’ll find you
Underneath the moonlight
Waiting for the sky to change from black to blue
And we’ll lie here
Underneath the sunrise
Waiting for our teenage hearts to
Tell us what to do

We’ve never been so eager to leave
But still i'll miss the sound of wind pushing the trees
The same way that your voice still haunts me
Were not turning back
But still a smile would be something
If were walking into nothing

I’m looking for you too

And I’ll find you
Underneath the moonlight
Waiting for the sky to change from black to blue
And we'll lie here
Underneath the sunrise
Waiting for our teenage hearts to
Tell us what to do

And all I wanted was a chance
To tell you how I feel
This is way to real
And still we’ve never been so eager to leave
But still I'll miss the way your voice sounds
Keeping me from falling asleep

And I’ll find you
Underneath the moonlight baby
Waiting for the sky to change from black to blue
And we’ll lay here under
Underneath the sunrise
Waiting for our teenage hearts to tell us what to
What to do


The author's comments:
this piece is just about being a teen

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on Jan. 1 2011 at 9:44 pm
Planet.Violet, Goldsboro, North Carolina
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this is the best thing i've read on this website. it's flawless and flows great

on Jan. 1 2011 at 7:01 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
dream as if you'll live forever
live as if you'll die tomorrow

LOVE THIS :D

really do love this, sooo much

its so relatable

please look at my peice in the wirters workshop under the poetry one, i think you could really help me with it because your style is more similair to mine.t the thread "says i need a title" and goes on to say ill help you if you help me, which i of course will. so please take a look at it. i feel like im on the edge of something really great, but missing it by a few things. thank you!


on Dec. 30 2010 at 12:20 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

Wow:DD, this is amazingg!! Its greaat!! :))) itd make a really awesome song on the radio


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