November 23, 2010
Did you ever love me?
Did you ever care?
Did you want to comfort me
When I was crying on the stairs?
Obviously not,
Because you didn't even try.
So I'm packing up my bags,
And I'm telling you goodbye.

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Bethani said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 9:18 pm
Magnificent! It's a short scene showing true emotion. :)
LaShay_25 said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 1:35 pm
That's how I sometimes feel but I to afraid to runaway and say good bye, it's just not me. I think you poem was ..... more than great ( don't know the word)
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