Who You Choose To be

October 27, 2010
Cross my heart,
And hope to die,
You've made my day,
You've made me sigh.

And silently,
I write your name,
All etched in blood,
Inside my veins.

A thousand words,
A sunset sweet,
A broken chorus,
Melodic beat.

Away from home,
So lost with wounds,
Found a comfort
To finally swoon.

No matter who,
You choose to be,
I'll still be here.
I'll still be me.

So remove your face,
And place it there,
And you run your fingers,
Through my hair.





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starlight26 said...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 3:29 pm
Wow great poem! I love its meaning and rhythm :) check out some of my work if you get a chance and keep writing!
 
mary_blue356 said...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 6:55 am
Cool poem. I love it!
 
MaryJayne said...
Nov. 13, 2010 at 5:37 pm
2 words LOVE IT! 
 
pookie11 said...
Nov. 13, 2010 at 1:31 pm
i really love your song!!! <3
 
AquaFire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 13, 2010 at 7:32 am
LOVE this!!!!
 
annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 8:57 pm

:O In love! 

With your poem ;)

 

 
running4chance This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 1:48 pm
i really like it :)
 
hi_from_wonderland said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 4:35 pm
it was gr8, only it kinda cuts off. may-b if i was hearing the music it would sound better. still, awesome!
 
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