I Can't

October 4, 2010
By Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It's to dumb to see or say you'll still sing it, and I'll just cue the applause" - Marilyn Manson


You tell me to love you,
You tell me i should appreciate.
You tell me I'll do what you say.
You tell me its not my choice anyway.

I can't see you,feel you, or even aknowledge,
The tiny satisfaction from your death.

You tell me what i should be,
You tell me what to see.
You don't know what i see.
You don't want to know.

I cant be you,feel you, or even aknowledge,
The tiny satisfaction from your death.

The satisfaction of your death.
My satisfaction in your death.

You tell me to be everything,
Then you tell me I'm nothing.
You tell me i should be like you.

But I'm the one who's satisfied with your death.
I've got a tiny satisfaction with your death.
You gave me a tiny satisfaction with your death.

I can't see you,feel you, hear you, or remember you.

You want me to feel sorry for what i did to you?
They tell me to be sorry for what i said to you,
but according to you,
I can't.


The author's comments:
I think this one speaks for itself. To clear up any confusion before-hand, I didn't kill anybody... Their death was honestly natural.. they weren't murdered in any shape or form.

Secondly, In the line ".... Or even aknowledge the tiny satisfaction of your death/from your death" I'm pretty much saying the hate towards the person lasted, and remained so strong that it didn't matter that they are gone, I still hate them and their death wasn't enough to satisfy me.

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on Oct. 15 2010 at 6:01 pm
LunaWingsFlyAway GOLD, Farmingdale, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"And neither the angels in heaven above,Nor the demons down under the sea,Can ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee
...Of my darling-my darling-my life and my bride.In the sepulchre there by the sea."

-Edgar Allen Poe

this is a veryyyy good poem...it shows the raw emotion of anger and hate....and it connects to me...keep writing

Brina said...
on Oct. 15 2010 at 2:00 pm
this is very good. i think that a lot of people will be able to connect their lives and other things to this. keep up the good work.

lisa<3 said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 6:36 pm
Absolutly amazing!
i loved this, its exacly how i feel about my father :/            keep up the amazing writing!! (:




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