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I hope
That you move away from here,
Meet a nice girl
Who seems sincere,

I hope
When you take her out to dinner that you hold her hand,
And you kiss her softly
On the sand

And I hope
That you start to forget my name
And when you lie together
She tells you that she feels the same

Chorus:
Then I hope she dumps you,
Yeah, I hope she dumps you,
I hope she leaves you picking up the pieces
Of your broken heart
Yeah, I hope she dumps you,
Preferably on Facebook
I'd love to see the way you'd look,
Might be a little like I did
Yeah, I hope she dumps you.

I hope
That you meet some other chick
And she likes Batman just like you,
Yeah, you two click

I hope
That you get that familiar feeling
Yeah, your mind starts reeling
When you see her

And I hope
That you feel like she's the one
Because unlike me and you
You guys have fun …

Chorus:
Then I hope she dumps you,
Yeah, I hope she dumps you,
I hope she leaves you picking up the pieces
Of your broken heart
Yeah, I hope she dumps you,
For another girl on top of that
'Cause let's just face the facts,
You make boys look bad.
Yeah, I hope she dumps you.

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mollybug13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 27, 2013 at 12:46 pm:
i agree with sarah98..... frickin awesome
 
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sarah98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 25, 2013 at 8:46 pm:
i totally thought i was one of those "I'm so sweet wanting you to move one" things but then the whole hoping she dumps him made it frickin awesome. 
 
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e@gles16 said...
Jan. 31, 2013 at 10:47 am:
yeah it was a awesome poem i really did like it, becuz that is wat i feel like..
 
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Ollieanne said...
Sept. 16, 2012 at 1:20 pm:
hehe:) this is funny!
 
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Mkthedreamer said...
Jun. 20, 2012 at 11:55 pm:

That was awesum! :D

Funny bt deep 

 
e@gles16 replied...
Jan. 31, 2013 at 10:48 am :
you are right it is awesome..(:
 
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iCheeto This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 28, 2012 at 2:55 pm:

This is aweeeesoooom I laughed and it was great!  Its so fun to read and so pointedly aimed at the jerk who hurt you.  Its really good I hope she dumps him too lol ;) Please read some of my work and give me some feed back :)

 

 
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BleedNLove said...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 12:07 pm:
Great job!! Everyone has put pretty much exactly what I wanted to say... keep it up! :) 
 
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MorganM. said...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 9:25 am:
GIGGLE. Amazing I feel like this about every low down guy. Its really funny. How did you get the idea for this?
 
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ninja17 said...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 6:19 pm:
This was deep/funny :) I love the facebook part!
 
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Ada D. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 10:59 pm:
so funny! I love the twist :D
 
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AEMarcher2395 said...
Oct. 9, 2011 at 9:50 pm:

This is deff one of my favorites..! Great job, hope to hear more from you..! =]

Also check out my page and let me know what you think.. Thanks!

 
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she-is-a-strange-duck said...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 6:56 pm:
YOu get em, girl! this is fantastic and well written and I hope i hear it playing on my radio someday... and I'll say "HEY! I KNOW THIS SONG!"
 
she-is-a-strange-duck replied...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 6:57 pm :
And btw, can I get music for it anywhere?
 
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KatrinaCampbell said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 7:09 pm:
This is brilliant!
 
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lolxxaddict said...
Jun. 24, 2011 at 2:17 pm:
I Love This :P Specially When You Said "preferably on facebook" & "for another girl on top of that" :) Makes You Feel Great Even When You're Heart-Broken! Great Job <3 
 
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CarolynQ said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 6:00 pm:
HAHAHAHA ohmygod I hope this turns into a song, I'd love to hear this on the radio. Brilliant.
 
14hipkri replied...
Jun. 23, 2011 at 3:30 pm :
I totally agree! I think it's amazing!!!
 
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Shortblueeyes224 said...
May 26, 2011 at 1:00 pm:

 

Ha...I love this!

 
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TeenPoet said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 7:13 pm:
Dude this is amazing. I love it. i understood what you meant to say. And this is really good stuff.
 
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