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What There Can Be

I don’t really know how
To start a song about love
As I search for some answers
And pray to God above
But now I’ve got to say
Why I’m feeling this way
So here I go, just want to let you know:

How much I love you
And how much I care
I want you to know
That I’ll always be there
In the good times and bad
When you’re happy or sad
Baby I need you to see
What there can be!




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Ashley P. said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 5:22 pm:

amazing

 

hay can u chek out my stuf and comint if u dontmind ?

 
distant_dreamer replied...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 5:25 pm :
Aw thank you so much!! :) I would love too! :D
 
Ashley P. replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 2:40 pm :
thank you ~!!!!
 
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olican16 said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 3:20 pm:

Your welcome and thanks for saying you'll check out my stuff!!

 

God bless!!

 
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Hope_PrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 8:06 pm:

Wow! When I first read this I was like- This girl is amazing! And she rhymed it so perfectly. Then I looked at the writer's name and saw it was YOU!

That's so sweet of you to write it for- you know who. I hope someday he does read it. Amazing job! I LUV YA!

 
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olican16 said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 5:37 pm:
so im doing like you asked checking out your stuff... this is soooooooo great i reallly love this. This is one of those poems that is soooo very easyly relatable!!! love it 5 stars!!!
 
Monica Y. replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 5:42 pm :
lol thanks soo much! I'm still working on it, but I just thought I would put in the 1st draft! :D Thanks again!! I'll check out you other poem too. :D
 
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