"i'm alright"

July 12, 2010
By Anonymous

I'm alright, but it seems I've got you down
Your stitches take away from your looming frown
Darling, stand your ground
It's only a matter of time before love comes around
I'd gladly take the hurt you feel
Your pain and cuts I'll gladly steal
Just know I never hated you
I'm hanging from this cross I've made
I'm not dying, just glad you stayed
And I hope you enjoy the view
Enjoy the view
I'm alright, but it seems I've got you down
All the blood is rushing from your broken crown
And I see that you've found
A painless way to drown
I want to take the hurt you feel
Your cuts and bruises I pray will heal
You may tear me down like you often do to you
I'll hang from this cross I've made
Your burdens lifted. I'm glad you stayed
And I hope you enjoy the view
Enjoy the view



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on Aug. 10 2010 at 8:03 pm
theUnknownandtheAnonymous PLATINUM, Stockton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"All that is required for evil to prevail is for good men to do nothing." - Edmund Burke

Thank you very much, the feeling is mutual. And please, do check out some of my other work as well. =)

on Aug. 9 2010 at 8:45 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow this is so powerful!!! awsome!! If you could please comment and rate my work that would be amazing!! thanks and ur so good!!!


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