Tender Hands

June 15, 2010
By Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa


I’ve never needed anything more than I need you now
Never met someone who could drive me crazy
But when I look at you I know that this is how
Love is really supposed to feel


Brick walls and barbed wire guard your heart
I can’t get close enough to try
Your makin my heart fall apart
I swear I’ll never make you cry


(Chorus)
Tender hands to hold your heart
Strong enough to break through all your walls
Tender hands to hold your heart
To be there to catch you when you fall


I love you and you love him
But he’s to scared to see the truth
So when your waiting heart grows dim
You can hide under my roof


(Chorus)
Tender hands to hold your heart
Strong enough to break through all your walls
Tender hands to hold your heart
To be there to catch you when you fall

The author's comments:
This particular piece is very special to me. I wrote this for a girl that I really liked... She however was not ready to move on from her last relationship... she had her heart guarded where no one could get close and that was the inspiration for this song. Let me know what you guys think..

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on Aug. 6 2010 at 7:53 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

ok. I'll try to look at the other ones sometime.

Cajsim SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 8:37 am
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

Haha thanks... Im writing some more that should be up soon...

on Aug. 3 2010 at 9:39 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

I like this A LOT. It's soo raw and you can see the true emotion in it. This conveys raw emotion at it's finest. Keep writing like this and that girl will fall all over you.

Cajsim SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 1:42 pm
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

Thanks alot!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 1:08 am
DannyKid33 PLATINUM, Pleasant Hill, California
34 articles 2 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't ever let the media tell you what to look like. You're beautiful the way you are. Stay beautiful, keep it ugly." - Gerard Way.

this is really really good and im so sorry that things turned out this way for you :( but honestly your writing is amazing and so good!! keep it up

Cajsim SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 3:49 pm
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

Lol thanks Meago!

Meago GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 12:57 pm
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
17 articles 2 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
How come when you need something the most- that's the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

Cj, all your stuff is worth reading!

Cajsim SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 12:25 pm
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

Thanks guys I promise to write something worth reading soon!

on Jul. 20 2010 at 11:03 am
wolfpack270 SILVER, Oak Ridge, Tennessee
7 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Beware your thoughts for they become words. Beware your words for they become actions. Beware your actions for they become habits. Beware your habits for they seal your fate."

CJ this is awesome....you better keep writing.

Meago GOLD said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 9:44 am
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
17 articles 2 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
How come when you need something the most- that's the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

CJ!!! I love this! I'm so glad that your stuff is getting posted now!!

Long Live The Laundry Crew!





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