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I’ve never needed anything more than I need you now
Never met someone who could drive me crazy
But when I look at you I know that this is how
Love is really supposed to feel


Brick walls and barbed wire guard your heart
I can’t get close enough to try
Your makin my heart fall apart
I swear I’ll never make you cry


(Chorus)
Tender hands to hold your heart
Strong enough to break through all your walls
Tender hands to hold your heart
To be there to catch you when you fall


I love you and you love him
But he’s to scared to see the truth
So when your waiting heart grows dim
You can hide under my roof


(Chorus)
Tender hands to hold your heart
Strong enough to break through all your walls
Tender hands to hold your heart
To be there to catch you when you fall



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Brittaner said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 9:39 pm:
I like this A LOT. It's soo raw and you can see the true emotion in it. This conveys raw emotion at it's finest. Keep writing like this and that girl will fall all over you.
 
Cajsim replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 8:37 am :
Haha thanks... Im writing some more that should be up soon...
 
Brittaner replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 7:53 pm :
ok. I'll try to look at the other ones sometime.
 
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socrchik33 said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 1:08 am:
this is really really good and im so sorry that things turned out this way for you :( but honestly your writing is amazing and so good!! keep it up
 
Cajsim replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 1:42 pm :
Thanks alot!
 
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smartypantsscorpio22 said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 9:44 am:

CJ!!! I love this! I'm so glad that your stuff is getting posted now!!

Long Live The Laundry Crew!

 
wolfpack270This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 11:03 am :
CJ this is awesome....you better keep writing.
 
Cajsim replied...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 12:25 pm :
Thanks guys I promise to write something worth reading soon!
 
Meago replied...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 12:57 pm :
Cj, all your stuff is worth reading!
 
Cajsim replied...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 3:49 pm :
Lol thanks Meago!
 
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