Reasonable

April 20, 2010
By GrinGo BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
GrinGo BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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As i open to the first page of the book of my life,
I tear everything out
and put in what I'm not.
Everyone says how seeing is believeing
But i believe I lost my eyes.

Trying to keep my head up
kowing reasons keep it undegroud.
I want to know what have i done so wrong
to you
Just tell me what am I supossed to do.

I can't stop you from perservering.
There's no need for any interferring.

So finnally hate me.
Hate me everyday
You hate me because
you finally see whats good for you.

Now its bye to you.
I'm kicking my shadow
for any mistake
I thought i made.



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on May. 12 2010 at 9:02 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

It's pretty good, only you made several spelling mistakes.......but I did like it anyhow!:)Could you check my stuff out?

on May. 12 2010 at 11:53 am
invasion-of-the-asians BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
keep on keeping on

i like this poem. its really good and interesting. it does make you think. and the title was what caught me also. and does anybody know how long anything you submit stays in pending? ugh! check it out when it does get accepted :)

on May. 11 2010 at 7:20 pm
mysterywriter11 GOLD, Dickson, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Reach for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. ♥ ♫♪♫♪♫♪
"believe in your dreams, no matter how small or big they are, you might just be surprised... "

interesting! It sure makes you think

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on May. 9 2010 at 3:13 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

The title made me want to read it! line 5 is my fav.!  " Im kicking my shadow for any mistake I thought I made!" -- thats just great!

Check out my work, I really what to know what you think,


on May. 7 2010 at 3:08 pm
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
Love Always. :)
When the tides of life turn against you and the current upsets your boat, don't waste time and tears on what might have been, just lie on your back and float.

I really liked your poem, it was really true, interesting, and good. I thought it was original and good. You are a talented writer, keep up the good work! :) Check out some of my work?


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