April 20, 2010
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As i open to the first page of the book of my life,
I tear everything out
and put in what I'm not.
Everyone says how seeing is believeing
But i believe I lost my eyes.

Trying to keep my head up
kowing reasons keep it undegroud.
I want to know what have i done so wrong
to you
Just tell me what am I supossed to do.

I can't stop you from perservering.
There's no need for any interferring.

So finnally hate me.
Hate me everyday
You hate me because
you finally see whats good for you.

Now its bye to you.
I'm kicking my shadow
for any mistake
I thought i made.

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HeronHero said...
May 12, 2010 at 9:02 pm
It's pretty good, only you made several spelling mistakes.......but I did like it anyhow!:)Could you check my stuff out?
halfasianpersuasion said...
May 12, 2010 at 11:53 am
i like this poem. its really good and interesting. it does make you think. and the title was what caught me also. and does anybody know how long anything you submit stays in pending? ugh! check it out when it does get accepted :)
mysterywriter2012 said...
May 11, 2010 at 7:20 pm
interesting! It sure makes you think
Shahed said...
May 9, 2010 at 3:13 pm

The title made me want to read it! line 5 is my fav.!  " Im kicking my shadow for any mistake I thought I made!" -- thats just great!

Check out my work, I really what to know what you think,

GreenActress said...
May 7, 2010 at 3:08 pm
I really liked your poem, it was really true, interesting, and good. I thought it was original and good. You are a talented writer, keep up the good work! :) Check out some of my work?
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