Love ??

March 11, 2010
By FiREproof PLATINUM, Morrisville, North Carolina
FiREproof PLATINUM, Morrisville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm Like a little dog chasing cars, i wouldn't know what to do with one if i caught it"--Joker--
"You either die a Hero or live lonq enuff to watch yourself become thu Villan"--Harvey Dent


I laugh out loud.
With my man that makes me proud.
We count to nine and we’re on a cloud.
He kisses me sweetly.
I kiss him back weakly.
He makes me lose my control.
I still listen to what I was told.
When I met him I was shy, he made me bold.
The bells rings.
I get excited for us to meet.
My heart he can keep.
I close my eyes as he rubs my feet.
I feel it when he thinks about me.
He has set me free.
When we kiss we breathe each other in.
He desires me and I desire him.
He takes my reason away.
And when he leaves I wish he would stay.
He looks at me and knows what I wanna say.
His love is proved thru his actions.
He loves me with no subtractions.
He kisses me on my forehead.
Then we go to bed.
He slowly rubs my legs.
He gives me what I want iont even beg.
He told me im what he’s been looking for.
Told me my attitude and outlook on life is what he adores.
I say I love you he said he loves me more.
He would catch me if I was falling toward thu floor.
Said im valuable and not sold in thu store.
He never wants to lose me no matter thu sore.
Said he can make it all better.
He’d be with me even thru thu bad weather.
He gets on me as light as a feather.
Its like we know each other.
Second day together and I met his mother.
My best friends boyfriend is like his brother.
He grabs my hand and holds my mind.
I never woulda thawt he was my kind.
My heart was lost and he looked for it to find.
That forever he said he wants him to be mine.



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on Apr. 24 2010 at 9:13 pm
FiREproof PLATINUM, Morrisville, North Carolina
33 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm Like a little dog chasing cars, i wouldn't know what to do with one if i caught it"--Joker--
"You either die a Hero or live lonq enuff to watch yourself become thu Villan"--Harvey Dent

thank you VERY much i love the feedback :) it is what keeps me qoinq .. i have read several of your poems as well .. when i fiqure out hoq to comment i will :)) thank you aqain

on Apr. 23 2010 at 11:17 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

This is very sweet! It is beatifully written, and is really good. It grabbed my attention from the very first line, and held it. Great job!


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