sitting here

March 19, 2010
By tia94 BRONZE, Pheonix, Arizona
tia94 BRONZE, Pheonix, Arizona
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
quiet your heart and listen,close you eyes and dream,open your mind and amagine


sitting here for all theses years

whipping away all these tears from my dirty face

such a decrease

try to be good for my friends and family

it still seems like their better then me

but i say put the past behind your shoulder

think about your future

we can still dance in the rain

we can still skip with no pain

no bad dreams tonight

cause this time

this time

its going to be alright.


The author's comments:
this was origionaly a song that i made up and its been in my head for over 3yrs and i just couldt help but wondering what it would sound lilke if it was a poem so here it is.i wrote this poem about my life in ohio when i was living with my grandparets with my mama and sister.hopefuly my poem touches people .

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tia94 BRONZE said...
on May. 2 2010 at 4:50 pm
tia94 BRONZE, Pheonix, Arizona
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
quiet your heart and listen,close you eyes and dream,open your mind and amagine

thank you for your comment that was nice of you.

on Apr. 27 2010 at 1:16 pm
seahorse BRONZE, Kärdla, Other
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It's good i like your poems:)you are very talented!

tia94 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 2:53 pm
tia94 BRONZE, Pheonix, Arizona
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
quiet your heart and listen,close you eyes and dream,open your mind and amagine

really?thakyou.

 

 

 


on Apr. 12 2010 at 7:04 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

ohh i liked that!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was real gooood

tia94 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 4:44 pm
tia94 BRONZE, Pheonix, Arizona
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
quiet your heart and listen,close you eyes and dream,open your mind and amagine

it took a week to get posted.im sure that yours will get posted soon.thak you for the complement i will check and look at your things keep up tha good work.

on Apr. 1 2010 at 5:41 am
all_boys_hate_me BRONZE, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Wow this was really good!!!!!!! How long did it take for your song to be put up here? I am asking because about a month ago I posted a song and it hasn't been put up yet.




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