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March 11, 2010
By Rozababe SILVER, Evergreen, Colorado
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Rozababe SILVER, Evergreen, Colorado
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"Life is like an ice cream cone. Not really but I am super hungry right now!"- Me

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You told me to get over you
You told me we were done
I tried my hardest to forget
But your my number one
I fell so hard
It kills inside

I can't forget you
Your, your my only one
It kills just to see her
Tell me why

© Brit H., Peabody, MA

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This article has 7 comments.

Mrs.Lautner GOLD said...
on May. 12 2011 at 12:37 pm
Mrs.Lautner GOLD, Fife Lake, Michigan
17 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
someone asked me if i knew you
i turned my head wiped my tears away
and said no not anymore

Gravitation isn't responsible for people falling in love.

The hottest love has the coldest ending

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I love it its just like wht i am going through

 

Alexandria6 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:58 pm
Alexandria6 BRONZE, Hickory, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This world will never be, what I expected. And if something went wrong, who would have guessed it?"

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Thanks! I will
_DEIDRA_THURMAN_ said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 11:11 am
_DEIDRA_THURMAN_, Aztec, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
“I learned what is obvious to a child. That life is simply a collection of little lives, each lived one day at a time. That each day should be spent finding beauty in flowers and poetry and talking to animals. That a day spent with dreaming and sunsets and refreshing breezes cannot be bettered.”

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keep writing please! i agree i love it! that is like the hardest thing to go through so i know how people feel and excspecially if  you were together a really long time!
_DEIDRA_THURMAN_ said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 11:10 am
_DEIDRA_THURMAN_, Aztec, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
“I learned what is obvious to a child. That life is simply a collection of little lives, each lived one day at a time. That each day should be spent finding beauty in flowers and poetry and talking to animals. That a day spent with dreaming and sunsets and refreshing breezes cannot be bettered.”

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GOOD JOB! keep writing please i did go threw that and i know what it is like! thanks for making my old break up better! keep up the good work and im sorry for your break up. i know what its like! 
secrets_of_silence GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 4:53 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

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love it

keep writing please?

Rozababe SILVER said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 1:01 pm
Rozababe SILVER, Evergreen, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments

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"Life is like an ice cream cone. Not really but I am super hungry right now!"- Me

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I will! The pain from a breakup sent me into a writers heaven. He hurt me, it made me write to get away from the world. I spent hours laying in bed writing. I loved him. He made me hurt and the only way i could even try to get away was writing. Now i have someone to write for. That is why i wrote my story Summer Love. Check it out :)
Alexandria6 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 9:12 am
Alexandria6 BRONZE, Hickory, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This world will never be, what I expected. And if something went wrong, who would have guessed it?"

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I really like this! Please add more if you can. I'm actually going through that exact problem right now, so it was great reading this.