Baby, Please Wait For Me

March 9, 2010
By EcoGelane SILVER, Portland, Indiana
EcoGelane SILVER, Portland, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Verse:
She hears the phone ring, she picks it up.
She hears only one thing, the voice of,
the man she loves, was shot today.
He served his country well, but passed away,
with a bullet to his head,
and a note in his hand.

Chorus:
My dear lovely, I will always love you.
I have been so lonely, and then I think of you.
I think of us, and the times we shared,
I can’t wait to come home.
Baby, please wait for me.

Verse
They buried him in the back yard.
And she watched the grave under the stars.
The moonlight playing along his name,
things have never been or will be the same.
So she drinks away the pain,
knowing there’s nothing to gain.

Chorus:
My dear lovely, I will always love you.
I have been so lonely, and then I think of you.
I think of us, and the times we shared,
I can’t wait to come home.
Baby, please wait for me.

Bridge:
She walks outside, by his gravesite.
She sits and starts to cry.
Picks up the barrel and pulls the trigger,
without a care of fear.
But when they found her,
there was a note in her hand that said. . .

Chorus:
My dear lovely, I will always love you.
I am not so lonely anymore, after I thought of you.
I thought of us and the times we shared,
now I am coming home.
Now baby, please wait for me.

Wait for me.
Wait for me.
Baby no more waiting for me.



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on Mar. 26 2010 at 11:46 pm
EcoGelane SILVER, Portland, Indiana
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Thank you for the comments. I really appreciate it. And DHgirl, i am srry to hear about ur sister. I am goin to enlist myself. And thank you EmoAnon :) thank you all!

EmoAnon GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2010 at 10:39 am
EmoAnon GOLD, Westport, Indiana
16 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Money cannot buy happiness but it can buy choices." - Mrs. Renyolds (Cosmetology)

Wow. Great way to capture the mood, great way to put voice and feeling into this piece. Made me cry, but in a good way.

on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:07 pm
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)
Writing is an art few people master it. -me

:( good song. . . but it made me think of my sis whose in war. love the song. BRING OUR TROOPS HOME!!!




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