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My heart's a fragile thing,
Are you worthy of holding it?
My hand needs a stable hand to hold,
Are you stable enough?

I might seem like I have it all together
But at my center
I'm just a little girl
Who needs an adult to help her

When I cry
Will you say good bye
Or wipe my tears away?
Will you break my heart,
Or are you truly here to stay

I might seem like I have it all together
But at my center
I'm a little girl who needs an adult to help her

Will you be there through my ups and downs?
Or will I just scare you away?
Can I be myself
Will you see for who I truly am
Or will you run away?

I might seem like I have it all together
But at the center
I'm a little girl
A fragile little girl
A little girl who needs an adult to help her find her way



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JohnWall_for_MVP said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 3:40 pm:

This is the type of thing that is already perfect in its raw format, extending revising and other things, will allow it to supercede most modern day poets, I find this poem ver jeanese qua. but I love it

 

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AgnotTheOdd said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 3:16 pm:

Not bad, lyrics are hard to write.  Nice use of repetitions and rhyme scheme

WOuldn't mind if you commented on some of my stuff - any really

 
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Yvaine_96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 7:46 am:
its really good but u hav to keep writing to make it even better. I LOVED the way you tried to convey your feelings, it was really touching. Check out my poem Simple Advices. I dont think i am that good and that's why i need your opinion. KEEP WRITING!!!
 
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