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February 24, 2010
By NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
8 articles 7 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.
- Susan B. Anthony


I'm sorry i'm not perfect,
I'm sorry i'm not strong,
I'm sorry I'm not good enough to admit that I was wrong.
I'm sorry that I couldn't keep up with pain down deep inside.
I'm sorry that it took so long for me to find the light.
? But I don't know what I'd do, if I had to be alone one day with out you
Iv'e been abandoned and abused but , nothing compares to the pain of losing you?
I have come so far, My hand reaches out for that one last star.
I don't think I can go on like this my hand's are bleeding with broken wrist.
And what a crazy wold we live in to day where people can't just stop and say thanks.
?I don't know what Iv'e done, I left you abandoned and abused.
But nothing compares to the pain of when I losing you.?
I'f it was my choice to make I would have let you live instead of me.
? Because I don't know what Iv'e done. I'm so lost with out you. Let you abandoned and abused.
And nothing compares to the pain of losing you.


The author's comments:
I wrote this song after a dream i hand i hope you like. it may not sound great now but with the gutiar music its amazing. And I picd the pic cuz it reminds me of screaming from hurt. Hope you enjoy

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on Apr. 28 2010 at 7:47 pm
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
8 articles 7 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.
- Susan B. Anthony

Yes i have and it sounds really good acording to my friends i may put it on Youtube later

on Apr. 27 2010 at 4:38 pm
SwordGirl SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have enemies? Good. That means you've stood up for something, sometime in your life."

-- Winston Chuchill

This was really good - I could feel the rhythm behind the words that makes it a song. Have you written a tune for it?

Milo! said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 4:28 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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