Super-Human Senses

February 26, 2010
Your eyes can see through me.
They detect everything.
There's no hiding.
I have no secrets.

Your nose can smell fear.
It reeks.
I try to mask it.
But you call my bluff.

Your ears can hear my thoughts.
You know my answers.
My thoughts are too loud.
"Put them on mute."

Your touch is electric.
Hot, fuzzy and strange.
It's a drug.
And I'm addicted to it.

Your tongue can taste defeat on my lips.
I've submitted to you.
You've won.
There's no helping me.

My senses are weak.
Too premature for resistance.
Slow and stupid.
But ready to adapt.





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Milo! said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 4:36 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
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