He's A Rainbow

February 17, 2010
By SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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His smile is the sunshine
His smile is a golden ray
His smile is a circle of heaven
Warmth on a cold day

It makes his perfect eyes shine
It’s like a candle flame
It’s something you can stare at
A bright heart it contains

I don’t know how to describe it
It’s that warm and fuzzy feeling
It’s a tingle through your fingertips
It’s the glances you’ve been stealing

His smile is the sunshine
But this you already know
Of course his laugh will be the rain
So together it’s a rainbow

The author's comments:
I wrote this kinda randomly so hoping you like it!

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on Jul. 24 2010 at 9:36 pm
MedievalMouse94 SILVER, Toms River, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"A broken heart may heal with time, but even the smallest of wounds leaves a scar."

Love it! It's amazing

on Jul. 16 2010 at 1:25 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson

Nice! Love it! :) Really great!

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 1:02 pm

I really like the ending especially! "His smile is the sunshine/But this you already know/Of course his laugh will be the rain/So together it's a rainbow"

Love it love it love it!

I was actually wondering where the rainbow part came in, and I like what you did with the last stanza relating the sun and rain and rainbows. My mind doesn't go down that path, I was kind of expecting colors, but I like the way that you did it better :D

Keep writing!

on Jul. 1 2010 at 4:43 pm
Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Go big or go home

hey i like ur poem!! do u know how long it takes for something ive written to be done pending? how long does it usually take?

on Jun. 17 2010 at 12:28 pm
lol the man police are after me!!!

on Jun. 16 2010 at 7:10 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Because you said 'cute' lol :)

on Jun. 16 2010 at 8:55 am
yw :) Why am I a fugitive? lol

toflyaway said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 1:29 am
toflyaway, Melbourne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You're Bonkers. But I'll tell you a secret, all the best people are" -Alice In Wonderland (2010)

Random poems are the best kind of poems! You've captured really disticnt feeligns and the fact that it's random, as in, it was just a moments burst of inspiration, adds all the more meaning to it! :)

on Jun. 15 2010 at 6:23 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Aha :) Thank you very much 

And hmm... I think you are now a fugitive lol :D

on Jun. 15 2010 at 4:33 pm

YES OMG! Simon Cowel feedback--you asked for it!

Oh please, how am I supposed to be able to do my worst to this poem? It melted my calloused heart (my ex girlfriend and her friends tell me that I'm a bleepedy bleep bleep bleeep without a heart)

What I liked about this thing was that it rhymed. I can't stand poems that don't rhyme lol. I also liked that it was short.

What I absolutely loved about this (and I'm going to sound REALLY sappy) is that I can tell that it's from the heart. It's like a simple, happy little poem that is, in fact, cute. There. I said it. "Cute." (Isn't it illegal for guys to say cute? lol)

I mean there's nothing bad I can really say about this poem--like I might say that the writing of it could mature a little bit but it's "cute" because it's simple and just sweet.

And to be honest, if I had a gf that wrote me a poem like this, my heart would melt like no other. I'd probably try to hide it like any guy would, but it would still happen. This isn't going to be like compared to the so-called "great poets" like Emily Dickinson and Walt Whitman or whatever, but it sure as heck is one of the sweetest poems in the history of poemkind! Great job. I really liked it :)

on Jun. 4 2010 at 2:22 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Thanks so much!!

katie-cat GOLD said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 6:38 am
katie-cat GOLD, McClellandtown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Look after my heart, I've left it with you."- Edward Cullen
"To love another person is to see the face of God . . ."- Les Miserables
"Don't say the old lady screamed. Bring her out and let her scream." - Mark Twain

Awwwww!!!!!  This was so cute :)  I absolutely loved it!  Very creative and original! Keep it up:)

We-R-3 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 7:14 pm
We-R-3 BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
A picture is worth a thousand words, however it takes a real artist to turn words into pictures.

Have you heard about the new Lebron Iphone, you have to set it on vibrate because it doesn't have any rings

Wow, that poem actually was quite easy to decipher, I love the last two lines Of coourse his laugh is rain so together its a rainbow,

Very Nice not mushy like other poem of the sort

on May. 20 2010 at 6:15 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Thank you!!!!

on May. 16 2010 at 7:53 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

I love this its great!!!

on Apr. 12 2010 at 9:53 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awww last line was cute:) whole thing-i liked it

on Apr. 11 2010 at 7:29 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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aha thank you!

saher BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 6:36 pm
saher BRONZE, East Windsor, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Develop success from failures. Discouragement and failure are two of the surest stepping stones to success.
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Really nice!

I dont know why but i cant stop reading the third para!:]


on Apr. 10 2010 at 3:09 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Thank you :)

on Apr. 10 2010 at 2:03 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

This is really good! I love the way you compared a guy to a rainbow. Really awesome!


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