February 14, 2010
By CEJONES SILVER, Fontana, California
CEJONES SILVER, Fontana, California
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The breeze blows smoothly
Voices are coming through me
It sings its sorrows to my ears
Nothing left in me
My heart breaking slowly
As I Drown at this point here

Can someone help me breathe
The waves are taking me
The current won't let me go
You see me, But you choose not to reach,
You could hear me scream, But you don't care how loud I could be
Here I am just drowning
I can’t breathe
Here I am just trying, but you're the only one I could think
I'm in the deep now
Just wondering what's underneath
I 'm losing strength throughout everything
The water is already coming over me
The only thing that is on my mind
Remembering the memories
Please someone help me erase everything from time

Its too late, You cant reach me
No, You already lost me
The tears is already high up you see, I'm drowning
There's no more breath for me
Can some one help me breathe
The waves have taken me
But I don't want the current to let me go
You saw me, you could of reached
You heard my screams, But you didn't care about me
Now I'm drowning, there's no more breath for me
Here I am just crying
Because you're the only one I could think

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Milo! said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 3:58 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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